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walking scared,
covered in blood.
i am no longer paired,
having every step make a flood.

my life slowly passing,
through the thick black doors.
my life flasking,
showing images from the ceiling to the floor.

falling into the depths of the unknown,
screaming when no one can hear,
yelling at a high pitch tone.
at a tone even dogs would fear.

counting down,
5..4..3..2..1....
awaking, screaming with a frown,
tears falling creating a ton
of water.

scared stiff,
covers pulled to my nose.
feeling a cold drift,
stuck in a scared stiff pose.

now realizing it was only,
a nightmare
©2004-2009 *deathified-chick
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Submitted: December 6, 2004
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while i was away in texas this weekend
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Striking and scary!

I like that alot Jocelyn!
:+fav:

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What!? You put those Frosties back immediately!
whay thanks =D :hug:

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np :smooch: ^_^

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What!? You put those Frosties back immediately!
teehee :glomps:

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:dead: aff-gaggan...af-airzjan :dead:
yes yes yes gothicly satisfiying love it

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Zachary Mark
thank you teehee

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